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‘Candies’ are best friends of anyone, but not with this strange 8-year-old boy. In everyone else’s perspectives, candies come in different colors like the rainbow, but for him, candies have no color. Candies bring a smile to your face because of their different sweet taste and a fun burst of flavors, not for him, candies only have one taste; bitter. “Candies causes tooth decay,” the only fact he knows about what candies are. He never liked candies. Until a little girl younger than he came in, she gave him this particular object wrapped in a pastel plastic foil. It was a……………….
Hello people! It would be my pleasure if you guys want to continue writing the story by leaving a comment below! Thank you!
November 27, 2017 at 6:41 pm
Hey Nook, I think that it was a… giant gummy bear. I like your post a lot and I love the details you added about candy. I also love that cliffhanger!! Great Job!
-Matthew.
November 28, 2017 at 10:33 am
AH a giant gummy bear! I am actually really bad at writing, glad you liked it!
November 27, 2017 at 6:43 pm
Hey Nook! I have decided to continue your story! Here it is: It was a……. giant jolly rancher! I like your post a lot! I like the information that you gave to me about eating candy! I also really like the cliff hanger that you added! Here is a link to my blog so you can comment on one of my posts: http://rmhor92d.edublogs.org/
Thanks,
Ryan H.
November 28, 2017 at 10:37 am
giant candies are the best! i remembered trying jolly ranchers too. i tried adding the best cliffhanger i could possibly do. i will sure visit your blog when i have time.
November 27, 2017 at 6:50 pm
…piece of chocolate! This was a really interesting story and it was very engaging. I also liked how your story had facts about candy. Come check out my vlog! http://tghat92d.edublogs.org/
November 28, 2017 at 10:45 am
good decision, thank you:) i will sure visit your blog!
November 28, 2017 at 6:34 pm
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November 30, 2017 at 6:48 am
Dear Nook,
Nice post! I have to say, good job on the story. I liked how you took candy, which is popular around the world, and made a story around it with someone who doesn’t like it. I know a few people who don’t eat candy, and I think the boy in this post is all of them when they were his age. If you’d like, please check my blog at the following link, and have a good day. http://hmsjustinm.edublogs.org/
Sincerely,
hmsjustinm
December 13, 2017 at 8:52 am
Thank you so much! I’ll sure visit your blog soon.